This is one of my favourite stories, although it’s been knocking about for a while and a lot of readers aren’t keen on it. It’s a dialogue, and I’ve heard many readers say that it would be better as a radio script. No, it wouldn’t. If it was radio, the mother’s voice would need to be clarified from the start. It only works if the reader is unsure about her voice, and supplies it themselves. https://www.thequietreader.com/magazine/mother-child-sharif-gemie/